Narrative writing😃

"HOME RUN" Yelled Mikel as everyone watched the ball fly beyond the fences.
For a moment there was silences followed by the sound of breaking glass in
the distance...

We thought that the ball hit the local Dairy that was over the fences. Mikel went to look
over the side of the fences to have a peek if we had broke the front window of the Dairy
but there was no broken glass and the ball is over there on the other side of the road which is no where
near the Dairy.

 Mikel went to go to the other side of the road to get the ball but also to check the
Dairy for no sins of broken glass. When he got to the Corner of the Dairy he started to see little
bits of  shiny glass on the ground when he got to the back window of the Dairy  he turned around to see inside the back window of the Dairy.
When he looked inside someone had robbed the Dairy.

Mikel stared at the broken glass then Mikel started to here
foot steps in the the Dairy before Mikel could run away the rober was to quick
and saw Mikel.

 Mikel almost fainted then the robber ran past so fast he was like a wolverine
chasing a fox Mikel realised that he had stole a life supply of chocolate which is at the back of the Dairy
Mikel knows this because his Dad used to work at  the local Dairy in Taipa

Mikel could not ring the Police because he left his phone at home so he went and chased him down the walkway for a long time. Mikel could not identify him because he was wearing a mask but it looked like a ski mask when the robber had ran out of breath Mikel caught up to him and found a nearby telephone and called the Police.

 When the Police got there they took him back to jail and Mikel got a award for his great accomplishment and he was only 12 years old. And the good thing was that the chocolate was given back to the new owner of the Dairy.

fair an equal

Pekk of the week